A very creative effort
I can see you have a very creative mind and i like the way you work.
It's a very time consuming process making creations (simulating writing and drawing) and i can recognize the effort. Still, i think there is room for improvements. maybe some layering? Perhaps letting some images stay on screen as more are created. Then having them merge together to create something new
I'm just trying to give you ideas. Obviously, the rest is up to you
very nice improvements
I really enjoyed this new instalment in your series. despite the fact that FF6 is probably may favorite of the FF series (as far as characters go) the nostalgia factor isn't all that is keeping my interest.
The storytelling is well crafted and the characters are in their proper form. Also the use of music (final fantasy and other square titles like crono trigger /cross) were all perfectly implemented! Major props for your soundtrack choices
My only complaint is that you should consider upping the frame rate a bit next time around. Although the sprites dont come with a lot of animation options it would be nice to see some tweens run a little smoother. Just more ideas to continually improve the series!
why?
dude you've submitted this movie 3 times now....
its a good movie but once was enough -.-
I flagged the other one for deletion, I just wanted to re-submit the cleaned version. I also didn't think many people who had seen it already would still see it while it is in review, but yeah maybe alot of people spend their days blamming and protecting stuff?
I really like your work
You continually try to create new and different types of pieces and i really appreciate it. I think this series is especially interesting. It takes a lot of guts to expose your personal life to an online community that tends to be a little crude.
Yet your humour and design will always overcome the odds it seems
I hope to see more Storybook episodes in the future.
Where do i know you from?
I've heard of wingzero somewhere.... was it FFXI? Or was it gamers dotcom... hmmmm
Anyways, i can see the effort and i applaud the work. Some things need improvement though like the bomb scene. Try to slow down Mario bouncing around the screen. And the background dissapearing is disorientating.
The first bit was quite well done though. I was thinking you rushed it at the end
It's from Gundam Wing.
I liked this movie
I think you did a good job for a first attempt. I'm still working on mine and i know it takes a lot of work to jump into.
So thanks for not creating something shitty like most people who submit their "first flash"
Thankyou! Finally some one who realises my pain! Ive been tryin to submit for ages. Bye bye and good luck
wow... i am actually making something very similar
i guess you sort of beat me to it... though my drawing moves after it gets created
congratulations this movie will pass!
because it is horribly violent and vulgar
as long as you do that newsground users will support it. So congratulations on passing the BLAMming stage
hooray!
no...thank u
Why this wasn't number one is beyond me
One of the best flash animations on newgrounds... so why don't other people see that?
fantastic
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Repetitive Flash 
FFVI:DarknessFallsEp.2 
Final Extacy 
Storybook 2: gel 
TMICR?: Chobits 
Sonia's Escape 