dancingmind's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Secret Lives of Squirrels]

I don't think you should finish this

I think it was perfect the way it is. When you announced that your trial was finishing during the cartoon you created a hilarious moment, It was briliant! Maybe when you get your flash kit you should start something new.

this, in my opinion, is a finished piece

great job!

[Guilty Consience]

that had better animation then south park

though that's not saying much

i want to see more original characters and ideas from you

good luck with your future projects!^.^

[Battalion 7 - Episode 1]

i hope this makes it through judgement

i rally liked it.

i wouldn't call HIV funny, but you kids seem to think it is.... which is fine. But there was definately some good things in here. Keep it up

[A Mother's Day Short]

The animation speed was too slow

That looked like it would be a nice flash but the speed was really horrendously slow... or atleast it didn't line up with the dialog. Put up the FPS dial and you will have a nice flash!

MrBrentoon responds:

I don't know, your comp might have lagged, mine seemed to be ok, but ok I'll take that into consideration

Mr.Brentoon

[Chibi-short #1]

i like the style but it feels unfinished

I too submitted a NG piece that was used for a school final, so i understand what you were thinking here. But it really isnt hard to add in a song. And music will gretaly improve people's interest in the piece.

Also, is there a reason the size is so big? You could try converting all of your frames into a movie clip then resize and pan the movie clip accross a smaller frame for optimal performance

hope this criticism helps,
dm

[Don't Stop Me Now]

that was the greatest thing i have ever seen

as a huge fan of Ed Atlin's odd comedic pieces it was nice to see something like it with the same brand of humour. Great WRITING, great DESIGN and great EXECUTION

Thank you for making something so visualy interesting

[Metal Gear Music tribute]

wow! you really like metal gear!

And i love your entries

congratulations on daily 5th (with STS) and i look forward to your next release

[Ledhed]

that was great.

I am not sure why you thought people would vot eyou down. this is a nice piece that adds some variety to NG. I do wish there were more of these kinds of flashes instead of the empty thoughtless violent ones... oh well

I'm not sure if it's good enough to win a contest, but good effort anyway! good luck

afromonky responds:

Thank you... so much. Really.

[Prowlies at the River]

Mr. Phillips, what are your amazing secrets?

I am really impressed by your increasingly amazing skills. I really wish you would share some of them honestly! I do not understand how a scripted camera works, but the fact that you were able to pull off a scene of the same quality of Disney's tarzan swinging scenes is spectacular.

Also, since you make your own music and sound effects (something i really appreciate BTW) i was wondering what compression you give them to keep them at their superior best while retaining a decent compression.

Please leave me some tips so i can improve as well